Some people swore the house was haunted, the house that my parents thought that we had to move into. I thought "why cant they just listen to what people say there are plenty of other houses on the road why this one."
It was moving day and i was so not ready to move or move into a creepy house. When we got to the hosue it even looked haunted, black everything black. It even had those shutters on the windows you know like the kind you see in the movies. I slowly walked up the steps to the door, but the door opened by its self. I was spooked. As i walked around the house i could feel this cold breeze like someone was breathing on me. I shivered. Walking up the steps to see my room as the steps were creeking all the way up, then i saw it a shadow, but it moved so fast i couldnt tell what it looked like. I flowed the direction it went, and the room that it went into just happened to be mine.
That night i was so scared to fall asleep wondering if that thing or whatever it is to come out and attack me. I knew gost shouldn't be real but what i saw this evening was deffently real. when i closed my eyes i felt something over me, so i opened them and i saw it, it ws laying over me looking me right in the eye. i wanted to scream, but nothing would come out. the look of it took my breath away. Its face looked not even human like a persone faced was burrned off. Its eyes were black, dark black. It had a long ragged dress one. Then it made this grawling noice and i freaked out and ran to my parents room and yelled goat. Knowing me they believed me and went and looked in my room and saw it to. They yelled for me to get my siblings and get out of the house. Nothing was ever the same after that night.
I like it. I love how everything is so descriptive and easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteI liked your story. It reminded me of dreams and how I was just as afraid when I was young. Be careful with the spelling, and make sure you capalize words.
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